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My Life Compared to a Car
Contributed by
EmSal
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Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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If I were a car I would be used.
I would be one that they would neglect.
For me there would only be bad news,
As I just rust here, now a defect.
People would just pass me by,
Because they wouldn't be able to sell me,
As I would certainly dissatisfy,
And I would no longer come with a guarentee.
I'd be one that would make people frown.
I'd have a cracked windshield.
If anyone actually uses me I'd breakdown,
And all my glossy paint has peeled.
After awhile I'll have no mobility,
And you will sell a part of me for cash,
But then it's a very high probability,
That the rest of me will be ready for a smash.
Copyright ©
EmSal
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2003-09-13 20:05:00]
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Re: My Life Compared to a Car
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 02:32:09 AM AEST
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interesting idea...but so sad...I would be a comfortable old car..a little worn out but with an engine that keeps going
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Re: My Life Compared to a Car
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by fallensilence on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 02:45:46 PM AEST
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| this was a great idea for a poem and i really enjoyed reading this. good job. -david |
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