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Violence
Contributed by
Kimmie_mac
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Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 02:45:00 PM in AEST
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Will it ever end
The violence
Can the people bend
No pretense
Stop the madness
Stop the pain
Nothing but sadness
As bullets rain
No one wins
This deadly game
let wounds mend
Both take the blame
Don’t fight
It’s no solution
You have a voice
So use it.
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Kimmie_mac
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2003-09-13 14:45:00]
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Re: Violence
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 04:04:26 PM AEST
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Hi kimmie-mac,
violence is somethink we all sea every day,
happen to love onces or someone we know.
i like this because you showed that if one speak out
what is happening to them we can end this violence act.
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Re: Violence
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 06:21:03 PM AEST
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strong, good write
Shari |
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Re: Violence
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 09:10:05 PM AEST
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| Powerful write! |
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Re: Violence
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by LovingWhispers on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 11:42:00 PM AEST
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| Well said!!! Nice and strong..and yes!! To the point :) |
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Re: Violence
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by painted_echos on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 12:52:50 AM AEST
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| very well written...should be silk screened, made into posters, and hung in the halls of every school. it is strong, to the point (as you said!), and it reaches. i will print it and give it to my 12 yr old. thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Violence
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by Crow on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 02:49:03 AM AEST
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| I agree with all here, no good ever comes from it. great write |
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Re: Violence
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by Aika on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 03:20:36 AM AEST
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Dear Kimmie,
very lovely,
very nicely said
but the problem
is that people
do not wanna hear
it is easier to fight
than to love.......
aika |
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Re: Violence
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 11:21:35 PM AEST
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Fighting never solves anything just pain!
Sorry to say I dont think it wont end! Christina |
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Re: Violence
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by venkat on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 03:54:43 AM AEST
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| Good write with a strong voice...venkat |
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Re: Violence
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by norm on
Monday, 22nd September 2003 @ 09:25:36 AM AEST
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Of course you're right, no one can argue,
when one is judge and jury, too,
That's when rage takes over thinking
wait for drop of the other shoe.
Man is made as man is made,
reacts quite poorly, i'm afraid,
it's been this way since earth began
the weakest point in our earth's man.
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