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A Tear Falls
Contributed by
Night_Child
on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A tear falls
Her love calls out
The memories, this house
Stained with him
Her heart torn
Their love is no more
How can he be gone?
When will the pain stop?
The moonlight hits her body
Illuminating her pale and fragile skin
She falls back
The ice cold water stabbing her, consuming her
The sun shines on her body
The life drained
The water carrying her to the shore
A tear falls
Her body is lowered to the ground
She will be forgotten
She wanders lonely lands
Searching
Searching for the one she lost
Her tears will fall for evermair.
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Night_Child
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2003-09-13 08:05:00]
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Re: A Tear Falls
(User Rating: 1 )
by squeesh on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 03:00:56 PM AEST
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its hard losing someone we love and you captured those feelings those lost tears and souls i thought it was a really good poem
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Re: A Tear Falls
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by Aika on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 04:18:37 AM AEST
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Shouldn´t she go
and shout loud?
Shouldn´t she not let him go
but stop and talk?
Hard, I know, too hard to lose
but knowing the reason why
the pain slows
Such is the life
we suffer a lot
for the awareness
of the sweet moments......
I wish you your tears
stopped falling
and smile brightened
your lovely face again.....aika
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Re: A Tear Falls
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 04:51:22 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc...This is a lovely poem..you have catpured the feeling of loneliness and loss really well..
Jenni |
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Re: A Tear Falls
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by xlx_chelsea_xlx on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 06:20:23 PM AEST
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| I thought the poems was wonderful if that it the right word to use.. and im not quite sure it is but great job |
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