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Humiliation Of Love
Contributed by
ruby1987
on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 07:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Heart plunge's into a sea of acid undaunted,
She doe not relinguish to love anymore,
She'd rather disintergrate,
She's countlessly been robbed of love and left bankrupt,
Longing for liberation she surreptiously submerges from the burning acid,
Cold and frigid inside she is found and held captive again,
Old, used and Numb-
Heart is nailed to the wall-
Left as a memorial declaring the humiliation of love.
Copyright ©
ruby1987
... [
2003-09-13 07:35:00]
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Re: Humiliation Of Love
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by Ruby1987 on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 07:53:39 PM AEST
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hi i made a mistake on the secon line. It should read "she does not..."
Hope readers like the poem. |
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Re: Humiliation Of Love
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 07:35:08 PM AEST
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This is good and I can relate to it a lot. I think u mean however 'emerges from the burning acd' not submerges. I could be wrong. Keep on writing.
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Re: Humiliation Of Love
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 06:33:20 PM AEST
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i can relate to this! very very very good write.
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