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Contributed by daen14 on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 06:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

How do I describe the way I feel
you are right beside me but so far away
this is probably my fault
but what can I say

Am I hiding it well?
Do you know that I know
Do you know that I can tell
I don't where your heart is
I can't feel it anymore

I miss you when you are right beside me
When you are holding me in your arms
This is not the way love is supposed to feel
Have I lost my charms

Or am I just not what you need
Do I not make you happy anymore
Have I ruined a good thing with my insecurity
Have I pushed myself out the door

For now I just keep these feelings inside
waiting for you to bring your heart back
but the waiting is lonely and hard on my pride

I know your world is filled with worry
And I don't want to be another one
So now I am trying to do what in the first place I should have done

I am moving out of the way giving you room to run

I know youneed your time to relax and do things on your own
I need my time to be with other people and have my own fun without you
And no matter what you might think
I have my own life too

Iam stronger than you think
Not quite the little girl you think you know so well
I am a woman and a strong one
I know I don't always show it
The way that I should do
I feel safe when we are together
I didn't think I needed too

I guess we all make mistakes in life and in love
In fact I know we do
I guess I just didn't see the mistakes that I was making when I was loving you
So I guess we'll live and learn through the good and the bad weather
I just hope that we can live and learn through these things together

I know that I am lacking in the number of my years
And I know what I have done to make you act this way
now that I can see
I just hope that you will remember
when you are out having your fun
that you carry two hearts with you and one of them belongs to me

Copyright © daen14 ... [ 2003-09-13 06:35:00]
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Re: untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 11:17:15 PM AEST
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Wow... I don't even know what else to say. It's so true of life and love... some parts really hit home. Excellent write, keep it up.

~ Moonlit

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