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***Midnight # Magik***
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Last night in moonlight shadows,I cast a special spell
lotus incense,3 rose petals,and all my tears that fell
A snip of hair,your photo,a poem,my love so true
Into a wooden bowl I placed, every memory of you
Strawberries and whipped cream,some songs and your keys
Scooby Doo,three stooges and a painting done by me
Stardust from my dreams of you,raindrops from the storms
Footprints from our walks,embraces that kept me warm
Leaves of winters past,that blew across my feet
I picked them up one time when I was walking down the street
The same moment they appeared to me,I'd been thinking about you
So I saw this as sweet kharma,and wondered if you would too
Ash from the fireplace,where winter's last fire had been
Many nights it warmed us,everytime it was in dreams
Just one thing left to add,so sad it got that far
Yet this woman has no use for,a burnt out fallen star
So into the bowl with all the rest of you and yesterday
I placed my fallen wishing star,said goodbye and walked away
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
... [
2003-09-13 02:35:00]
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Re: ***Midnight # Magik***
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 02:42:03 AM AEST
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so very sad...brought tears to my eyes
Shari |
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Re: ***Midnight # Magik***
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 03:14:17 AM AEST
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| Such sadness mixed with beautiful words. Awesome write! |
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Re: ***Midnight # Magik***
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by roisin on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 04:40:21 AM AEST
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so hard to say goodbye and walk away... ...nicely done
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Re: ***Midnight # Magik***
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 06:17:24 PM AEST
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so very sad babe....and written with such beauty as always. I think this is your best sad write! There is a time to say goodbye to the past....and hello to the future.
Roses at your feet :o) |
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Re: ***Midnight # Magik***
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 11:09:45 PM AEST
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That's so sad... made me wanna cry. Beautifully written.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: ***Midnight # Magik***
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by shelby on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 03:34:51 AM AEST
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ahhhhhhhh this is touching ans so very sad tears are brimming on my eyes
michelle |
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