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Until I die.
Contributed by
hot-shot
on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 02:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I never loved
But, when I saw you,
I fall in love with you at the first sight
Before you, my life was simple
Now it changed into an endless dream
In day no rest, until I meet you
In night no sleep, until I see you
You are on my lips
And always on my mind
Where ever I see, I see
Your beautiful face
Which gives the vision of an angel?
Your shinning eyes
Which looks as deep as lake?
Your soft lips
Which are as red & soft as the petals of rose?
What ever I listen, I listen
Your sweet voice
Which dwell in my mind like a nightingale’s song?
Since you came into my life
What was I? What I am now
You have touched me so deep inside
That no one ever touched
I love you & want love
My love! I love you so tenderly & passionately until I die…………….
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2003-09-13 02:05:00]
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Re: Until I die.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 11:38:23 AM AEST
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| hey man its really heart taking poem ..dud |
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Re: Until I die.
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th September 2003 @ 10:06:29 AM AEST
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Hey Man
you have a lot of emotions abt your
loved one :
but why not she know tht thing
please this poem sent to her
i hope she will be yours:
(amt)"general secretory".
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