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Our Meadow
Contributed by
LovingWhispers
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Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Across an open meadow,lush with golden flowers
My thoughts have entertained the breeze
Often drifting for countless hours
I have spoken with my heart,in whispers to the birds
And on wings with new direction
I give flight to my souls words
Inhalations of the real thing,scents of colours mellow
Tickle upon my attentiveness
In swaying grass of yellow
Searing heat envelopes me,toasting me light brown
Sweat trickles along my body
Sensuously,without sound
Stretch my legs and raise my arms,beneath the season's sky
I've moved this way so often
My breath, a constant sigh
Many miles I have taken you,through this day so bright
Many times I will awaken you,
To make love throughout my night
This here will be our meadow,yours and mine to share
If you need me,then just close your eyes
And you will find me there
I will be awaiting,dressed in golden flowers
And like a breeze across an open meadow
I will touch you for countless hours
As the yellowed grass is swaying,dancing to and fro
We will drift into each other,
As we play in our meadow
Copyright ©
LovingWhispers
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2003-09-13 01:35:00]
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Re: Our Meadow
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 02:08:26 AM AEST
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wonderful, vivid picture
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Re: Our Meadow
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 03:17:04 AM AEST
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| Beautiful simply beautiful. I can't seemingly say anymore. |
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Re: Our Meadow
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 06:24:43 PM AEST
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Well I can say more Goose..lol The tenderness with which you write, the vivid mental picture you bring to the readers mind, make you now and always my favorite poet. I will tell you the rest of my comment tonight :o)
ox Roses at your feet |
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Re: Our Meadow
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by Merry on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 08:43:12 AM AEST
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Full of rich imagery - sensuality and romance. A pleasure to read
merry |
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Re: Our Meadow
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 07:39:26 PM AEST
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Wow! Great imagery. I loved it very beautiful.
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