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Insanity
Contributed by
hazelnut
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Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Black anger coursed through my veins
My head pounded with the rhythm of revenge
A bitterness I would wreak upon those who left me writhing in pain
Who condemned me to insanity
Staying alive was a challenge
Coated in a film of feverish sweat
In plunged the venomous weapon
To quench my thirst---for blood
Disillusioned laughter escaped my lips
As I sunk deeper to the point of no return
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hazelnut
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2003-09-12 20:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Insanity
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 08:11:19 PM AEST (User
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I'm sure we all have a point of insanity at times. I know I've had my shares of insanity.
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: Insanity
(User Rating: 1 ) by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 11:29:15 PM AEST (User
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Very good write. Insanity is your friend, hold it close. |
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Re: Insanity
(User Rating: 1 ) by Rage on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 11:53:10 PM AEST (User
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Wow! Brilliantly written!
~*~RAGE~*~ |
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Re: Insanity
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 05:53:37 AM AEST (User
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excellent poem short and to the point.
Keep it up. |
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