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Stone Angel
Contributed by
MornieAtlantie
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Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Somewhere a tear falls,
Breaking the joy and peace,
Splintering the light as it calls,
Return to the shadows cling to identity.
Soon it shall be gone and with it all that you were.
As fear mocks you surrounding your future.
Suffering only mimics pain,
Shivering beneath your veil of lies,
As your immortal beauty is crimson with sin's stain,
While tears trickle down your face,
Destroying a piece of you every time,
It murders a part of you every day.
A rose lain upon the solemn ground,
Dripping with scarlet dew,
While your voice sings never uttering a sound,
A silent song shattering the resistance,
Through the pain and scent of death,
That surrounds your translucent hands.
A naked soul lies in the deep, engraved in stone,
An eroding angel sitting atop her pedestal,
Gazing blankly into the emptiness all alone,
Waiting for eternity but it never comes,
After all it's only a rock carved out from the depths,
To represent someone who died long ago.
One lays in the mountains roots sleeping to never awake,
The other motionless wanting to be real,
Screaming both have nothing to give and nothing to take,
Just wanting to feel alive once more,
Knowing that dreams shall never come to be,
Still hoping that one day they will arouse in a new world.
Copyright ©
MornieAtlantie
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2003-09-12 19:35:00]
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Re: Stone Angel
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by emystar on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 08:45:55 PM AEST
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Different but interesting.
Good work.
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
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Re: Stone Angel
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 11:36:05 PM AEST
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| Excellent. Nice word usage. I loved it. |
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Re: Stone Angel
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 05:56:11 AM AEST
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nice job, very gripping poem, well done.
I liked this one alot. |
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