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Bad Deal

Contributed by Walt on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Stormy, stormy night,
wind and hail,
candlelight,
burns holes inside my soul.

Laughing in the wind,
what is the mood that
you are in,
taking all their gold.

Stormy, stormy night,
fishing for,
what I think is right.
Children bought and sold.

Bone chilling grin,
it's your fault,
they win,
eating only mold (cheese).

Stormy, stormy night,
wish I could forget
the fight;
cards are bad, I fold.

If you knew the tale,
would you share
in the sale?
How could you be so bold?

Stormy, stormy night,
the noose fits
way too tight;
cards are pat, I hold.

Within the time left,
I your sorrow,
will address.
God, I am cold.

Stormy, stormy night,
bills counted out the
numbers checked out right,
my last smoke is rolled.

Rope loosened this time.
Life goes on,
I am just fine.
Who knows I may even get old!

Copyright © Walt ... [ 2003-09-12 16:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Bad Deal (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 04:13:44 PM AEST
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Welcome to ypdc, Walt... this is an interesting write... makes one wonder eh....
Jenni

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