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Archangle

Contributed by Asatru on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Why must I,
Be the one to forget,
Why must I,
Never have a chance to regret,
And why do you,
Never give me a chance,
And why do you,
Always put me inside a trance,

Why am I the one whose always wrong,
Why do I think I'll cry before long,
Why won't you answer me,

Why can't I be free,
Free of you and free of me,
Why can't I be free of everything,

Why can't I be right,
Why must you cause this fight,
I don't be friends,
I feel like the light of a diverging lense,
Spread out for you to see,
Why can't you love me,

I don't want to be wrong,
Why can't I be strong,
Why must you ignore me,
Can't you just hear my plea,

What is wrong with me,
What is wrong with me,
What is wrong with me,
Can you set me free,

I feel blinded by this brain,
I'm falling out from sane,
I think of you as an angel,
Archangel

I've never been angelically loved,
Though I've always remained unloved,
An angel could never love me,
Why can't I just see,

See I'm tearing myself apart,
I hold a longing for your heart,
The heart of angel,
Archangel,

Why can't you see,
What's happening to me,
See I'm tearing myself apart for you,
For you to love me too,

Pure love of an angel,
Archangel,
The love never shared,
Though you never cared,

I'll just sit here,
Shedding my single tear,
Though you'll never know it,
You'll never submit,

You'll never care,
I'll never share,
I'll leave with a scar,
And just stare at a star,

Why can't I just see,
See I'm tearing myself apart,
I hold a longing for your heart,
The heart of angel,
Archangel,

Why can't you see,
What's happening to me,
See I'm tearing myself apart for you,
For you to love me too,

Should I remain alone,
Just remain unknown,
Then again,
Do I have even one friend,

Is this even mine,
Should the two even intertwine,
Do I belong in that knot,
I think I'll just rot,

Am I strong enough to live,
Do I have enough to give,
Should I go down,
Should I even stay around,

Location lost,
What's the cost,
The cost to see your beauty shine everyday,
What's it cost to keep out the grey,

To see the sweet angel,
Archangel,
To love the tender angel,
Archangel,

I've been shamed,
By this angel I've never claimed,
For she sees me,
But won't let me free,

Why can't I just see,
See I'm tearing myself apart,
I hold a longing for your heart,
The heart of angel,
Archangel,

Why can't you see,
What's happening to me,
See I'm tearing myself apart for you,
For you to love me too,

I will remain unnamed,
Unshamed,
Unloved,
By my beloved,

My angel,
Sweet angel,
My,
Archangel.

Copyright © Asatru ... [ 2003-09-12 14:05:00]
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Re: Archangle (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 03:40:11 PM AEST
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Asatru,
Wow! You know what your poem reminded me of? The Phantom of the Opera. "Sing to me angel of music" and small references to angels made kind of a connection to your poem. It was a very deep, disturbing want, i think, that this was written about, no? Beautiful writing indeed.....

Love Joy and Peace,
Jellybellyprincess

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