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Thy Poetic Sicknives
Contributed by
Sonibe
on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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May the poetic "Sicknife"
Stab you constantly in the back,
And may it be thrown
By your conscience, which caused your heart to be black.
Let there be no one else
Whom you hurt or harm,
But may you be cursed
By your good luck charm.
Consider this a message
From a knight of the Poetic Table,
And hope that you can write
With a mind that is stable.
I wish upon you
Wisdom beyond thy years,
To cause no more hurt
And no more tears.
sign,
Sir Sonibe Makoto
(Arjun Blayze's Knight)
Copyright ©
Sonibe
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2003-09-12 13:35:00]
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Re: Thy Poetic Sicknives
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by sicknivesevered on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 05:35:41 PM AEST
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| This comes as a suprise. I really do not know what you're talking about. I suppose that you think that I hurt her when she read my poem, "Nightflower", because she cried for about five minutes after she read it. You are a fool. She cried because it was beautiful and it touched her. I guess you thought she was upset because she couldn't talk. Have you even read her comment on it? You think you are protecting her from me? I would be the last one to hurt her. You have stepped out of your place. You are not her "knight". You are her misconstrued friend, and nothing else. I might have a calloused heart, but I am also the one burdened with scars on my back. I am the reciever, not the giver and you will never know who created them. For it is not your business, just as the affair you just dipped your ignorant hands in. |
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Re: Thy Poetic Sicknives
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 02:34:03 AM AEST
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this was good although confusing... and yes don't dip your hands in affairs you know nothing about only tends to confuse the situation even more.
Bobo (joel) |
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