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Torture Room (Fear)
Contributed by
bobotheclown
on
Thursday, 15th August 2002 @ 07:08:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am stuck in a dark room
Only ten by ten (10 x 10)
There's no breathing space
No ventilation
Tiny and dismal
I peer into the inky blackness,
But see nothing except
My growing fear
I hear a clanking sound
I scream as the walls close in
The trolls squat and ugly
Eyes peering out
From hollow heads
Turn the cranks
And my jail becomes smaller
As my fear becomes a living thing
The walls slowly come closer
Threatening to squash me
Like a bug
I let out a rendering screetch
As the trolls laugh - hideously
The walls turn my body
Into twisted shapes
Snapping my bones like twigs
Claustrophobic,
My brain numbed
By the chronic pain
Hunched over like a hobo
Crying on the stagnant floor
I knew my end was coming
The trolls cackling their glee
As my brain oozed onto the floor
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bobotheclown
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2002-08-15 07:08:55]
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Re: Torture Room (Fear)
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 01:17:17 AM AEST
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Dear Joel @-<-<<-
great write my friend.. dark and lovely with trolls my kind of darkness hehe
always Nessa
*huggs*
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Re: Torture Room (Fear)
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 12:50:06 PM AEST
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Dark and deep, just the way you are.... lovely write!
*J* |
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