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Fantasy Land
Contributed by
Ivy
on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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This is a fantasy land,
leave all your worries behind.
Be here for a while,
it will be as if you have crossed a mile.
With flowers,leaves and snow to fall,
big huge trees that stands tall.
Water that is mystic blue,
all of this is very very true.
Lovely creatures waiting for you,
to come and give them a treat or two.
Play with them to your hearts content,
return home with memories that are very pleasant.
This land is for you and me,
which takes away all worries in a jiffy.
I know you guys visited this land,
cuz I saw you in that velvet sand.
Copyright ©
Ivy
... [
2003-09-12 04:35:00]
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Re: Fantasy Land
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by Damien on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 09:39:59 AM AEST
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| A truely lovely poem, keep visualising such fantasiies and it wont be long before they start turning true.-Damien |
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Re: Fantasy Land
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by lilch4ever on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 01:00:13 PM AEST
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| That was very cute and very good. Really liked it alot nicely done. |
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Re: Fantasy Land
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by The_Poet on
Tuesday, 23rd September 2003 @ 12:06:57 PM AEST
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Reminds me of Alice in Wonderland...!!!
Its really cccccccuuuuuuuuuutttttttteeeeeeeee!!!!! |
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