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Me, You and The silence
Contributed by
izza
on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I cried
You felt the pain
and consoled.
I talked
You listened intently
and understood.
I fell
You offered me support
and made me strong.
I laughed
You shared the joy
and laughed with me.
I was quiet
You were silent.
During this silence
Something changed.
Is it me?,or
Was it you?
Copyright ©
izza
... [
2003-09-12 03:35:00]
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Re: Me, You and The silence
(User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 03:47:22 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written poem..even though I am not the one you've written for.. I feel that..such a good friend will not change easily.. nothing seems to be changed...o.k good luck. venkat |
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Re: Me, You and The silence
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by venkat on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 04:27:39 AM AEST
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| I feel my earlier comment is appropriate since this is a poem on lost love...venkat |
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Re: Me, You and The silence
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by venkat on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 04:28:17 AM AEST
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| I feel my earlier comment is not appropriate since this is a poem on lost love...venkat |
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Re: Me, You and The silence
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 04:32:51 AM AEST
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Wow I really liked this poem. Hope everything goes alright with you two.
Emma |
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