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You let them have me
Contributed by
EmSal
on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 10:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You damaged me
It was all your fault
Even though you didn't do it personally
You brought on my assault.
All your lies
I believed every single one
How can I make you visualize
All the damage you've done?
All those times I stuck up for you
I didn't realise you weren't doing the same for me
You just quietly withdrew
And left me to be the one to plea.
I was the one left to take the punch
Which was really your fight
So angrily I say thanks a bunch
For I still cry in the moonlight.
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EmSal
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2003-09-11 22:35:00]
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Re: You let them have me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 02:07:58 AM AEST
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| So much anger and pain put in to such beautiful and soulful words. It makes my heart break when it take this kind of pain to create such a great poem. Peace be with you always in your journeys. |
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Re: You let them have me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th October 2003 @ 07:44:54 AM AEST
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Emma...I just came across this poem, after reading your one about your best friend and whether you should let her back into your life...now I definately say no. Anyone who could do this to you is not worth your time. I am so sorry that you had to go through this with her...it is very sad when a "friend" feels compelled to break that friendship for whatever reason. You are a very beautiful and kind hearted person...don't let her get the best of you.
-hugz- stacey |
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