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not another love song, please
Contributed by
painted_echos
on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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i’ll play the fool
for you.
believe anything you want
me too.
lay in my empty bed and cry
for you.
wait forever and a night
for you.
whatever it takes to be with you...
oh my love –
i do not think soooooooooooooo
no luv,
i was fooled by you, but i’m no fool.
now dude,
i don’t trust a thing you say or do.
no tears,
i’ve cried all the tears i’m going to.
empty bed…well…true, tis not for you.
can’t stay,
though i love you, i won’t wait you know
whatever it takes, is a little too much
for you.
(yeah…sounds much better)
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2003-09-11 22:05:00]
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Re: not another love song, please
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by EmSal on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 01:33:31 AM AEST
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Wow way to go painted_echoes!!...I'll be following this poems advice someday. Nice write.
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Re: not another love song, please
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 02:10:44 AM AEST
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| Awesome write. Noone should ever have to wait around, and feel this way. Great poem. |
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Re: not another love song, please
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 04:38:40 AM AEST
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very good write, way to go
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