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Eternal Moon
Contributed by
PhantomsLDY
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Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
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I shine my light upon thee
As you sail upon the open sea
My light will always guide your sight
Whenever you sail off into the night
No need to fear for I am here
I shine for you my guiding light
Flesh lovers may come and go
My ethereal love will always show
The ghostly light by which I guide
Will cast also shadows if you've a need to hide
They will carress your skin with a lovers touch
They are there to give my love so much
The love of another ends so soon
Compared to love of this eternal moon
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PhantomsLDY
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2003-09-11 13:35:00]
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Re: Eternal Moon
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 03:31:01 PM AEST
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Great writing! It has so much parallel to God's love for us (although I do not know if that's what you meant for it to be, but still). Anyways, I really enjoyed reading it.
Keep writing
Love Joy and Peace,
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Re: Eternal Moon
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by venkat on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 02:06:20 AM AEST
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Awww, so sweet and beautiful..assures him happiness on his return journey...best of luck
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Re: Eternal Moon
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 10:26:11 AM AEST
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AWW This was touching,I'm sure you cant wait for him to return home!
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Re: Eternal Moon
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 05:03:15 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful I really liked this one so much. |
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