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Please Try!
Contributed by
Unaekseveer1
on
Thursday, 15th August 2002 @ 06:59:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Oh my god
What have I done
I wished so much
For you to be the one
Yes YOU young lady
With the silky hair
Wherever you are
I long to be there
Without even trying
You’re everything to me
All the love and happiness
You shared for free
Tweetie my dear
I love you so much
Just you yourself
And the way that you touch
Feeling sorry for myself
I acted so bad
Without you near me
I completely went mad
When in contact with people
Being back at work
It made me realise
I’ve been such a jerk!
Copyright ©
Unaekseveer1
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2002-08-15 06:59:41]
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Re: Please Try!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 09:26:18 AM AEST
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Dean, this is very good. I once felt this way after loosing someone I loved very much.
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Re: Please Try!
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 10:13:36 AM AEST
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You just keep going over and over in your head every single conversation you ever had Candice,
Trying to see if I could've said something different or had a different look on my face or just anything to have stopped it all going wrong!
But I just had to realise that it was simply too late, she'd gone forever!:-(
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Please Try!
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 10:22:23 AM AEST
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I know exactly what you mean, Dean. I have been there, a few times.
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