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:::@ One Moon @:::
Contributed by
lovingwhispers
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Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
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Somewhere,before....
Long before we both knew the feeling
Of painted fields beneath our feet,
We were not of one blood..yet connected
Joined solely by giving...
Sharing...
The sun,wind and silver moon
I came to you,took my place within your wisdom
You held my eyes with the light of your soul...
As time passed, we did not grow old...we just grew
Together beneath the rolling clouds
^:::@@:::^
Here...nearby...
Still I walk among your whispers
A constant,gentle reminder..
Of who I am...where I'm from
How far I have travelled...with the wind
By the light of that same silver moon...
We once danced beneath
And will dance together, again... my ~brother~
Across the plains...our heartbeats will be heard
Like the ways of the ~Elders~
Whispers of wisdom...through the ages
^:::@@:::^
"Make me always ready to come to you
with clean hands and straight eyes"
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lovingwhispers
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2003-09-11 05:05:00]
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Re: :::@ One Moon @:::
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 05:25:55 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem! |
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Re: :::@ One Moon @:::
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 06:06:22 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful, sounds like you two have a real connection! |
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Re: :::@ One Moon @:::
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 08:26:07 AM AEST
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You have protrayed an unexplainable connection very well...
Shari |
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Re: :::@ One Moon @:::
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 11:08:47 AM AEST
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| WOW I so loved this beautiful poem,well done! Christina |
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Re: :::@ One Moon @:::
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 04:01:38 PM AEST
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you are a fragle flower, L.W. and a beautiful light for a wandering soul. I humbly thank you
for this thought,
you hold a very special place in my heart. Crow
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Re: :::@ One Moon @:::
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 07:56:49 PM AEST
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Even after all this time, the way your soul flows through your pen still takes my breath away.
Roses at your feet |
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Re: :::@ One Moon @:::
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 08:50:39 PM AEST
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I can certainly see how you would feel that you may have been a kindred spirit with Crow!
You are both loving protective spirits One Moon!
What a spiritual uplifting poem, I really enjoyed reading it
You are very talented indeed!
lovingcritters
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Re: :::@ One Moon @:::
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by shelby on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 02:01:25 AM AEST
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this poem gave me goosebumpss, there is a connection here that is unbelievable.Awesome write
michelle |
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Re: :::@ One Moon @:::
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by Merry on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 08:56:47 AM AEST
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Awesome! Very spiritual
merry |
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Re: :::@ One Moon @:::
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by jaeann on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 01:26:44 PM AEST
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| crow touches so many..........you have written of a beautiful connection.... |
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