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Dive

Contributed by Avarice_Riot on Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 12:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Bystander, witness me as I dive headfirst
into the plethora of gratifying liberation.
Inherent in me is the will to be unchained
Even as the water becomes effervescent
Dispatching bubbles to hasten past my
fingertips.
Where is the release? It is in me as you know
Never stopping for a breather, or even pausing
to make sure I am alright.
For I am more than alright,
I am indestructible, I am stronger
than ten savages combined
And in knowing this, the water parts
in all its saxe-blue glory and sun-tinged rays
To forge a path for me to march upon.
They may call me headstrong or bleedingly inane
Like a butterfly crossing a tarantula or
a fish swimming to its death in sweltering lava.
I am aware of all this and more
But it is inevitable, this awakening in me
A Sleeping Beauty of the roguish kind.
They christen me a witless imbecile, blinded by
society's phantom of acceptance.
I say I am vital to myself and those around me
Revelling in rebellion and anything is possible.
I am me and you are you, broken by the splinters
But I defied you to walk the plank and dive
into a mass of freedom and self-discovery.
Going down evermore yet ascending above the rest
I am sure I have found my home
All is well, and endurance sells.

Copyright © Avarice_Riot ... [ 2003-09-11 00:25:00]
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Re: Dive (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 12:26:40 PM AEST
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Hey, this is a cool poem!! I love this. Full of inspiration and teaching readers to be more bold in life. I like this a lot. Thanks for sharing to the community of Your-Poetry.Com. Love this very much, buddy.

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