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Haiku on HeartBreak
Contributed by
fredrika
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Thursday, 15th August 2002 @ 06:56:25 AM in AEST
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Haiku
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he walked out the door,
out of my life, & my heart
fell into my shoes.
Copyright ©
fredrika
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2002-08-15 06:56:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Haiku on HeartBreak
(User Rating: 1 ) by aernby on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 05:29:16 AM AEST (User
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typically,the break in a haiku comes at the end of line one, or line two -- you have placed it in the middle of line two -- interesting, and it works |
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Re: Haiku on HeartBreak
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dragons_Of_Rose on
Sunday, 28th September 2003 @ 05:51:47 PM AEST (User
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Always hate that. I've learned to bar my doors shut so no one leaves and comes in heh. |
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