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Making Love (haiku)
Contributed by
fredrika
on
Thursday, 15th August 2002 @ 06:55:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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our bodies join in
passionate ecstacy, 2
hearts become as 1.
Copyright ©
fredrika
... [
2002-08-15 06:55:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Making Love (haiku)
(User Rating: 1 ) by aernby on
Sunday, 3rd November 2002 @ 05:33:36 AM AEST (User
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again, you have chosen to break within line 2. Here it doesn;t work. |
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