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Not a secret
Contributed by
jackee_line
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Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 03:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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It's not a secret,
to want you,love you and to need you,
to wish, to hope and to dare dream.
It's not a secret,
that my love grows strong and I ache for you,
and that when I look into your eyes,they cast agleam.
It's not a secret,
that I dream of you each and every night
and that soon we will be together,
because it's right.
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jackee_line
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2003-09-10 15:05:00]
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Re: Not a secret
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by Menelaus on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 11:28:44 AM AEST
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| Passionate, poignant, pathetique piece filled with pathos. When will it really end, indeed? |
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Re: Not a secret
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by Trisha on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 09:47:05 PM AEST
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| hey i do like this and its all true outly outly |
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Re: Not a secret
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 12:14:42 AM AEST
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This is really lovely... I wish you all the best..
Jenni |
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Re: Not a secret
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th October 2003 @ 10:29:16 PM AEST
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Dont give up your dreams, Jackee.
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Re: Not a secret
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by Tiffyo4 on
Monday, 27th March 2006 @ 05:28:49 PM AEST
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nice write
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