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~ Ocean Memories ~
Contributed by
koqitiana
on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Sitting here alone watching the moons infinite light merging across the waves that crashed against the shore...
Your mind,body, and soul becomes one in harmony...
Closing my eyes letting my imagination run freely with the wind...
A place where you and I can be...
Moving closer to me whispering in my ear sending chills down my spine causing my heart to skip a beat...
Your eyes filled with so much compassionate that they are like the stars that shine against the heavenly sky...
Hypmatizing me unable to move not knowing what to do, but only to maintain my composure...
Opening my eyes realizing that in reality we can never be, all that is left are ocean memories....
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koqitiana
... [
2003-09-10 12:05:00]
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Re: ~ Ocean Memories ~
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by Kimmie_mac on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 12:13:01 PM AEST
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| I am glad that you are with your true love. beautiful poem. Sometimes if you wait patiently you get your reward. Kimmie_mac |
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Re: ~ Ocean Memories ~
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by Joe on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 01:46:26 PM AEST
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| I really liked this poem. I often think about my lost love. And i hope i have the same destiny as you did. |
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Re: ~ Ocean Memories ~
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 01:58:05 PM AEST
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Loved the imagery in this!! Your poem is very beautiful... ( a bit of editing is needed, tho')
Hope to see lots more from you.
Jenni |
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Re: ~ Ocean Memories ~
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by PhantomsLDY on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 04:32:40 PM AEST
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| This so beautiful and I am glad that the two of you found each other again after so long. |
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