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Im blaming you

Contributed by Eloise on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 10:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I stand here rope around my neck
balanced on a chair
This is my last message for you
Its game over for me here
I wonder why you loved me so much
And played inside my head
I remember all those nights i spent
Lying on my bed
Just so I could listen to you
And know you were alive
Whoever thought that it would end
With you taking my life
You seemed so true and so sincere
It didnt just seem like a bunch of lies
You seemed like you knew what i was going through
And not like other guys
But then you changed
Things fell apart
You played your games
And broke my heart
You stole away my wings
And then you gave them back
Im making up, with my life, for all the things you lack
I guess I'll be an angel now
But I just want you to know
Im never gonna watch over you
I dont care where you go
For you did this just to hurt me
To know just what you do
And so im taking my life tonight
And Im blaming YOU



Copyright © Eloise ... [ 2003-09-10 10:35:00]
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Re: Im blaming you (User Rating: 1 )
by Merry on Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 12:22:33 PM AEST
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no guy is worth taking your life - or even thinking about taking your own life - good write - strikes a familiar chord, a rather sour note - guys like that are well - not men - real men treat women with love and respect, that's how you can tell the men from the boys

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merry




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