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Planes of Existence
Contributed by
sandy
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Wednesday, 10th July 2002 @ 05:34:41 PM in AEST
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I ask of you questions
and I dont get answers
so I enter my mind
into yours and walk a line
which borders into different planes
Planes of existence
which harbours between
emotions, feelings, confusion and love
Everyday reflects a mirror
of the past, present and future
I dont know where I belong
into which plane I will exist
and if you will exist with me
next to me
or fade from the mirror of reflection
to see only one.
Copyright ©
sandy
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2002-07-10 17:34:41]
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Re: Planes of Existence
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by Jackee_line on
Tuesday, 29th October 2002 @ 02:01:47 AM AEST
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when questions are not answered, we start to question it ourselves.Great poem,
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Re: Planes of Existence
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by shepdog1972 on
Tuesday, 5th November 2002 @ 03:27:50 PM AEST
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this is a great poem and has a good flow...i hope to read more of your work soon...it has alot of meaning to it.......thanks for sharing
john
p.s
please go and read some of my poems also
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Re: Planes of Existence
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by buchi on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:13:07 PM AEST
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| Why do I like this..because, the style..its compellig... |
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