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Far Away
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fiero
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Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 05:05:00 AM in AEST
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POEM:
Forse non l'importa ma mi piace
In fatto, mi e piaciuta
come puo piacermi se non la vedo
e lontano, ma da sempre stava lontano
..quindi allora e piu vicino!
e adesso conosco che la amo!
G. P.
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fiero
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2003-09-10 05:05:00]
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Re: Far Away
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by Good_King_Bragi on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 11:28:50 AM AEST
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Just before someone trashes this poem, I will try to translate it for all and sundry to read (sorry for my wretched Italian if I botch this job) :
Perhaps it’s not important to you but I’m fond of you
In fact, I WAS fond for you
How could you please me if I see you not
You are (or AND?) far away (from her) but you’d been always far away
...Therefore (or THEN?), now you are (or AND?) closer
And now I know thatI love you!
Se qualcuno ha una traduzione più buona di questa mi dia subito, per favore.
Sig. Fiero,
Bienvenuto al circolo d’autori di poesia italiana qua! Mi piace questo poema – così piccolo e semplice, ma dolce all’orecchio e gli occhi. |
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Re: Far Away
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 01:44:23 PM AEST
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Ciao Fiero,
Is this what you were trying to say?:
Perhaps it does not matter
but it pleases me In fact,
how can it please me if I don't see you?
You're distant, but you always were distant..
Therefore then you are closer
And now I know that I love you
If so you did a great job of it
only thing is last line "la amo" should be "l'amo" Welcome to the site.
Write more for us. :)
Daniela
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