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Carry You!
Contributed by
LOWMAN613
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Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 04:35:00 AM in AEST
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FriendshipPoetry
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I know theres times you feel like giving up,
feel like theres no where to turn,
but just remember I'm there for for you,
I wont let your dreams burn,
I know theres times your legs feel weak,
and you feel you cant get through,
just when you think youre going to fall,
I will pick you up,and carry you,
when the sun goes down,& darkness falls,
and the stars are all to light your way,
I will lead you to the path I know,
I wont leave you astray,
If ever theres a moment of doubt,
dont let your troubles get you down,
theres a friend like me to help ,
I will be your laughing clown,
at times in life the path is long,
and the road is just too wide,
just remember I'll be there,
walking with you,side by side,
I will be your strength when you need it,
so if you feel like you should fall,
I will be there to carry you,
just remember to give me a call!
Copyright ©
LOWMAN613
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2003-09-10 04:35:00]
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Re: Carry You!
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by Kimmie_mac on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 04:38:48 AM AEST
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| This is fabulous.I love it. Kimmie_mac |
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Re: Carry You!
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 04:58:48 AM AEST
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How very loving, how very kind, how very self-sacrificing....no one could ever find...a daughter or person like you is very rare...
I think this poem is too! For how many people do you know today that would do that for you? Very Very few!
I loved the goodness your poem projected
My heart was moved, and totally affected!
Wonderfully moving, sincerely written
Always enjoy yours.....they are out of sight!
lovingcritters
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Re: Carry You!
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 06:28:41 AM AEST
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wow!! so beautiful, made me cry, but in a good way....you are a magnificent woman, so caring and strong...thank you for sharing your heart here...
hugs
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Re: Carry You!
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 08:23:38 AM AEST
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Christina this is beautiful. Your a kind dear hearted person
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Re: Carry You!
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 08:30:58 AM AEST
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great write
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Re: Carry You!
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by Ivy on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 01:15:13 PM AEST
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| A very nice write. Ivy |
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