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For my Friend
Contributed by
karoody
on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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If I was a painter
I'd paint you a beautiful world
If I was a singer
I'd sing you a soothing melody
If I was a builder
I'd build shelter that never breaks
If I was a spiritual healer
I'd make sure you were happy always
But I am only a poet
And this is my only gift
I hope it makes you smile
For if you search your heart
You will find my love there...
Come, revel in it's warmth!
Copyright ©
karoody
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2003-09-09 21:35:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: For my Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ronald on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 11:09:53 PM AEST (User
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I've always loved friendship poetry. Wow! I really can feel the warmth in this poetry! Great! Great job! |
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Re: For my Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 02:53:04 AM AEST (User
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Awww..very nicely done O.k your friend will surely revel in the warmth of love.. good luck.
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Re: For my Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomsLDY on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 03:35:01 PM AEST (User
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Kara, I'm sure that she already knows this and you have already paited her world more beautiful with your friendship. |
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Re: For my Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 07:32:25 PM AEST (User
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Ahh this is great there is no harm in being 'only' a poet especially one of your caliber. Very beautiful.
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Re: For my Friend
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Saturday, 18th October 2008 @ 02:50:55 PM AEST (User
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feeling the warmth of a beautiful loving write
Shari |
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