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Vagrant Lost Soul
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 09:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Leaning to the left and leaving late at night,
bending over backwards and driving out of sight.
Slowly rushing in and quickly rushing out,
not knowing where she's from and way too scared to find out.
Running from the darkness and reaching for the light,
a haze of corrosive dreams invade her once it's night.
She's searching for the exit and she's searching for the bridge,
to only find the one she's burned,
the remnants over the ridge.
Repeating the cycle,
repetition of pain,
as was mother so was daughter
they all take shelter from the rain.
She's at struggle with her fate,
she's struggling with her sins,
innate darkness follows her wherever she has been.
A penny for those thoughts,
a dime for your dreams,
some legends must be lost forever.....
a broken memory of fiends.
She's lost amid the clouds of darkness,
she's hiding from your sight.....
she needs you now more than ever....
she needs you holding her in the night.
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2003-09-09 21:05:00]
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Re: Vagrant Lost Soul
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 01:40:44 AM AEST
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| This a great poem. I can feel the pain and sorrow in your writing. Wanting to do away with the cycle, but always being drug back in. Marvelous write. |
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Re: Vagrant Lost Soul
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 07:33:34 AM AEST
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| Girl..if only I didnt know this feeling.But I do.This is a really excellent piece.(((huggers))) |
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Re: Vagrant Lost Soul
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 07:29:21 PM AEST
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i loved this the title was especially good. I loved this u made it seem all so real and vivid and in a way I guess it is real since i definitely know where your coming from. I don't get the first stanza, but I loved the rest.
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Re: Vagrant Lost Soul
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by Ilhar on
Thursday, 11th September 2003 @ 10:11:23 PM AEST
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excellent write
Shari |
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Re: Vagrant Lost Soul
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by venkat on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 05:48:55 AM AEST
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| very much captivating.. venkat |
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