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alive in the arms of the dead
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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a moonlight waltz with ghosts
a night time ride with spectres
i live in a mental graveyard
everything dies so fast
from beyond she calls to me
i meet her in the mist
an ethereal form that forever taunts me
with the impossiblity of one last kiss
through the dead forest of dreams
we dance, dreading the dawn
for the hateful kiss of sunlight
sends her fleeing back to hell
my days spent, sleepless
pacing, waiting for dusk
so that, once more, i can feel alive
in the arms of the dead
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Cancer
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2003-09-09 16:05:00]
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Re: alive in the arms of the dead
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:15:25 PM AEST
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Great write as always with lots of imagery.
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Re: alive in the arms of the dead
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:30:04 PM AEST
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| reminds me of the lure of a vampiress....cool imagery....the longing ...the desire....the hatred of the sun to take it all away....really good!!! |
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Re: alive in the arms of the dead
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 11:03:14 PM AEST
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| Ghouly good write ... intriguing and different ... Jan |
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