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Amoung Strangers
Contributed by
crow
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Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
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Something had always held me
from the edge.
That final breath you take,
before letting go.
Hope held inside,
never willing to release.
Someone had seen something
I had missed.
Willing to give my soul,
no silver was offered.
Someone has been here before me,
and quotes himself.
The door can stay open,
its safe amoung strangers........Crow
"faith, hope and love"
Thank every one of you for your visits!
Copyright ©
crow
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2003-09-09 14:05:00]
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Re: Amoung Strangers
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:23:26 PM AEST
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| allow me the slip!! oops! Crow |
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Re: Amoung Strangers
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 03:28:38 PM AEST
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I can not think of anyone I would rather visit more...good write
Shari |
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Re: Amoung Strangers
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by painted_echos on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:02:06 PM AEST
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| yes...have faith there is hope in love. as always, you're good! thanks for sharing |
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Re: Amoung Strangers
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:23:21 PM AEST
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| willing to give my soul...........yes!!!! |
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Re: Amoung Strangers
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by LovingWhispers on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 04:33:15 AM AEST
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Kindred is...as Kindred should be :)
If I lived closer,I would wear thin a path,between my door and yours.(((huggers))) |
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Re: Amoung Strangers
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by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 01:09:29 AM AEST
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| This is a beautiful write from a beautiful soul. Love will always conquer fear. |
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Re: Amoung Strangers
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by Merry on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 12:52:28 PM AEST
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Crow you are a spiritula person - beautiful write
I espcially like this line -
That final breath you take,
before letting go.
I can feel the butterflies in my stomach - know this feeling well - and yet I keep letting go willing to free fall and see what happens
thank you for sharing this lovely poem
merry
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