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Roads in your head
Contributed by
gery_giggles
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Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Left, right.
No,over there.
Look, just ahead,
C'mon, you can make it.
Just one more road in your head.
Wait,lets turn around,
Come back later.
We can get a map,
To the roads in your head.
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Re: Roads in your head
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 07:34:24 PM AEST
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Few words GG but meant so much to me...
and of course to you....indeceiveness can tear you apart. First you're up and then you're down...mood shifts all around! Make up your mind to FACE IT! It's never as bad as we think. Force yourself to get through it! It always looks and feel so much smaller when you're out of the brink!
Wonderful little poem. Enjoyed it very much GG
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Re: Roads in your head
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 02:43:58 AM AEST
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| Short and painful, but I know what you mean by you want to be alone but you don't. A man greatest enemy is himself. His thoughts can destroy him with such ease. Magnificant poem! |
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