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Love Waiting
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Depression, agression, building in succession,
The pain the rain, driving me insane,
Angels cry The Phantom says goodbye,
The Raven flies as a poet's heart dies,
Love, death, down to my last breathe,
Wild no smile, cying like a child,
Blame, the shame, tried of this game,
Hide, I'm blind, love's hard to find,
Tempted by lust, controled by trust,
A golden ring, demons they sing,
Inperation gone, something is wrong,
Like a pen with no ink, I can't even think,
Words that rhyme, maybe the last time,
Sarrow eats at the heart, my world falls apart,
Seperation I feel, forgot what's real,
Crazy I'm called, sceaming down the hall,
Where did you go, you took my soul,
Let me bleed, cutting myself so I can be free,
Left for dead, with a gun to my head,
Driving a truck with no breaks, is love waiting in the states?
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2003-09-09 12:05:00]
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Re: Love Waiting
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by Crow on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 12:12:51 PM AEST
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its a numbing feeling, be true to yourself.
super write! hi! phantom! Crow
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Re: Love Waiting
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 12:50:49 PM AEST
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As usual you pull at the heartstrings, I wish you safety until you are again with the one you love
Shari |
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Re: Love Waiting
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 12:51:37 PM AEST
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I am so sorry for your grief at this time.I totally relate.But life is soooooooo worth living.There is more to life than just a female/male relationship or so I have found.
My "self" is finally important to me! I hope you find that peace within also! Beautifully expressed emotion here! As always! :-)
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Love Waiting
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 03:51:06 PM AEST
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Matt, I am truly touched by this write. I can not even imagine how you feel right now, but your words tell the story so well...
I have missed you also and wish you all the best....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Love Waiting
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by Kimmie_mac on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 05:39:55 PM AEST
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Great poem. I can almost feel your emotions.
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Re: Love Waiting
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:18:58 PM AEST
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| I love the way you wrote this...very unique....very heartwrenching to be away from your soul spirit!!!! |
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Re: Love Waiting
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by Lone_er on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 07:41:26 PM AEST
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| Hang in there Phantom--Always darkest before the dawn. It'll be over soon. |
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Re: Love Waiting
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 10:35:09 PM AEST
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| I know she read this & feels this way too,You will soon be together soon! Return safely to her & your fam. God Bless what you guys do! Christina |
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