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Tell
Contributed by
daniel
on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 11:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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sandwich a sultry stare in
new corduroy
what did you think of it?
it's left to choice
you're selling a souvenir
with ships ahoy
avast in the circumstance
let's hear your voice
smell the swell
hear the gaze
don't you tell me you can't tell
you have that look in your face
second guess
thirsty whim
when the grave turns in the brave
you'll have to check it again
segments of contraband in
or something more
can you take another notch?
the ball's your court
spaced in the nothingness
we lost the door
still grieving all the outs
you're not the sort
see the twinge
face the hedge
don't tell me you can't tell
you have to come to the edge
searching grace
starving eyes
when the gates turn up the dates
you'll start to see the size
the trip was magnificent
well have a go
did you enjoy this round?
it's one of those
tempered in chapter's end
just so you know
no moment to spare a weight
we're cutting close
Copyright ©
daniel
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2003-09-09 11:05:00]
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Re: Tell
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 08:37:38 AM AEST
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Even though I can't say I know of what you've written exactly, it reads like you're trying to talk someone out of ending their life but then it could also be the beginning of something... hmm, you got me on this one. I LIKE! :)
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Re: Tell
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by Merry on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 02:52:08 PM AEST
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interesting read - zings right along - not sure where it's going but that doesn't matter - you know what it means and I enjoyed it.
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