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Baby. I've Got It
Contributed by
Merry
on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 01:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I smiled and he smiled
I laughed and he smiled again
Swishing by in my pretty skirt
Knew what effect that would have
So I stopped to talk with him
Bit my bottom lip in thought
Lowered lashes – it’s an execution
Turning up the power of what I am
Look him in the eye now
Feign misunderstanding
Tongue runs over my lips
He’s tumbling into my path
Unrighteous – unholy intent
Breasts displayed in a little t-shirt
He expels a long breath of despair
As I waltz away with inviting hips
To make him follow – like a dog
Make him sit, stay and beg
Baby, I've got it
The power within
~merry ~
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Merry
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2003-09-09 01:35:00]
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Re: Baby. I've Got It
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:46:57 AM AEST
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| Great poem. Sometimes woman have it easy. Made for the game of sexual wars. Making men quiver with such ease. It's not fair, but hey I love you women anyways.lol Anyways great poem. |
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Re: Baby. I've Got It
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by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:04:31 AM AEST
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This is a truly great poem. I absolutely love it. I have had a few men tell me that we women have all the power, when it comes to bringing them to their knees. Perhaps these men are right. This really is a great poem, I enjoyed reading it.
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Re: Baby. I've Got It
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 11:25:04 AM AEST
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Hi Marry,
i hope you remember who made that body.
this is a very imaginative write. |
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Re: Baby. I've Got It
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 01:03:15 PM AEST
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This may be true but the ego may get in the way. This is a very observational write!!!
I loved it!!! Buttttttttt........ 'tis not me in nooooooo way! ;-)
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Baby. I've Got It
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 02:20:03 AM AEST
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| Oooh..very charming write.. seen your comment on one of my poems..thank you Merry, venkat |
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