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NEVER, NEVER, LAND
Contributed by
emystar
on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 07:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As life unfolds before my eyes
a secret hidden deep inside.
The little girl in here says,
No that's not far away.
It can't hang around to haunt.
Never, never land what we want.
A place to be free from spooks!
Never before has there been
such an open book.
A memory, thought or wrong deed
can't enter inside to torture me.
Never, never land an
eternal home to enter
it's gates never to roam.
Till the day when heartaches cease
troubles keep me on my knees.
No matter how bleak it
may seem nor how far
we've been in between.
This vision will continue in my soul
to never, never land
someday I'll go.
Copyright ©
emystar
... [
2003-09-08 19:05:00]
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Re: NEVER, NEVER, LAND
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 11:31:41 PM AEST
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Emy, I LOVE this..... I think this is my fav of yours now... it's so beautiful and dreamy...
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Re: NEVER, NEVER, LAND
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 02:51:43 AM AEST
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Dear Little emystar....I wrote a poem about my Never Ever land, and will post it one day so you can come away with me! I just loved your Never Never Land, such a safe place to be!
Your poem was lovely, emystar.....twinkle twinkle a beautiful poet you are!
lovingcritters
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Re: NEVER, NEVER, LAND
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 08:46:46 AM AEST
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Girls u 2 sure know how 2 make this star shine. twink, twink, twinkle don't u know?
Luv ya'll gonna go.
PEACE, JOY, LUV, THANKS,
emy |
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Re: NEVER, NEVER, LAND
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 06:06:46 PM AEST
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Emystar,
Great poem! I love the Never never land idea. All in all, I'd say a 10.
;)
Jelly belly |
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Re: NEVER, NEVER, LAND
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by venkat on
Monday, 15th September 2003 @ 02:07:30 AM AEST
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| Well written..A good work....venkat |
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