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Maybe
Contributed by
ktbugg
on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Maybe I’m young
Maybe you’re too old
Maybe one day
We’ll become cold
Maybe you love me
Maybe you don’t
Maybe I’ll lose you
Hopefully I won’t
Maybe you’re lying
Maybe you’re astute
Maybe you’re stupid
But damn you sure are cute
Maybe we’ll never
Maybe one day
Maybe you’ll run
But I’m gonna stay
Maybe I’m crazy
Maybe you’re untrue
Maybe you don’t realize
I’m in love with you
Maybe it’s forever
Maybe you’ll be mine
But until I find the answers
Maybe will be fine
Copyright ©
ktbugg
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2003-09-08 13:05:00]
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Re: Maybe
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 02:01:13 PM AEST
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hmm I liked this the repetition really added to it. I loved the last line in the 3rd stanza. Hope to see more stuff from you soon.
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Re: Maybe
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 04:46:40 PM AEST
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ktbugg,
I'm gonna have to agree with Bobo about that third stanza, last line. I just laughed in my head at that. And that last line in the fourth really hit me hard. Do ya mind if I take a quote from it? I'm kinda, sort of giving anonymous letters to someone (who?- see my poem "Two Pools"). That would be awesome if I could quote maybe a stanza or two. Strictly speaking, I'd give you the credit. But that just put into words exactly what I wanted to tell him. Write me back care of comments on "Two Pools"
gtt- LOVED the poem,
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