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First From The Heart
Contributed by
tbsbikescene
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Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 09:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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i met you through a friend of a friend
i fell in love with your smile..
i melted with the site of your eyes
the sun couldn't keep up with the light you bring to my life
come into the spot light and kiss me hard...
kiss me for real this time
or we could just talk
a good friend told me "thats how things are supposed to work if you want something real"
but all i wanna do is fall in love with you
and watch the stars with you....im holding a galaxy when im holding you
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2003-09-08 09:45:00]
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Re: First From The Heart
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 04:53:54 PM AEST
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isn't that so true? You're holding the galaxy when you hold them. I just love that line!
Awesome writing,
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Re: First From The Heart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 05:43:26 PM AEST
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Heartful and very emotional.
"I'm holding a galaxy when im holding you"
Awesome line, beautiful poem. |
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Re: First From The Heart
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 09:44:06 PM AEST
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"all i wanna do is fall in love with you" - love that!! And the galaxy line too, of course. :) Wonderful write, it's so sweet and touching!
~ Moonlit |
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