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JUST THINKING
Contributed by
emystar
on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Life has it's own way.
Oneday so sure of myself,
thought everything was
together for me.
All of a sudden
life turns
find myself lost
not knowing much at all.
Searching my mind
for answers to turmoil
(once called joy)
nothing made sense.
What's wrong, I cried?
Getting back to myself
was my urgent desire.
As I begin to live
being mindfull of others,
found free.
Standing tall,
Here I am world,
We all have
rights to liberty!
Copyright ©
emystar
... [
2003-09-07 21:35:00]
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Re: JUST THINKING
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by Crow on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 12:23:08 AM AEST
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| emy I like your style, good write. Crow |
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Re: JUST THINKING
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 02:39:52 AM AEST
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| Great poem, emy! |
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Re: JUST THINKING
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 03:28:17 AM AEST
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Thanks crow and goose,
I eally do appreciate your comments and feedback. Makes it more challanging with feed back.
U two keep up your great writing too.
luv,
emy |
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Re: JUST THINKING
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by michelled43 on
Friday, 31st October 2003 @ 08:00:34 AM AEST
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| i really like this poem......great write! |
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