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I FEEL MY HEART CRYING
Contributed by
Del
on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 07:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can feel my heart crying,
Every night and day.
My heart wants you near me,
Not so far away.
It flutters like a butterfly,
Wheneven I think of you.
Then I feel the teardrops,
Like tiny drops of dew.
Please stop crying, my dear heart.
There's nothing we can do.
We have to pretend everything's fine,
And try to see this thru.
Maybe someday an angel,
From heaven up above,
Will tap us on the shoulder,
And sanctify our love.
Copyright ©
Del
... [
2003-09-07 19:35:00]
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Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:36:19 PM AEST
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This was so poetically beautiful it put tears in my eyes.
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Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 10:40:10 PM AEST
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| WOW!!...wow that was great it really did put tears in my eyes it just flowed great job keep writing |
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Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 10:52:30 PM AEST
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Oh Del..this is so beautul..and sad.. but hold on to hope....that angel may be closer than you know..
Jenni |
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Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 03:19:57 PM AEST
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Beodra! (Beautiful)
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Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 12th September 2003 @ 03:38:03 PM AEST
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I love it. It's the situation that I find myself in right now. My heart is torn to peices by seperation, yet being mended at the same time by the sweet memory, and the hope that I will be with my love again.
This is an awesome poem. Never cease to write.
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Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING
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by Ruby1987 on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 07:48:32 PM AEST
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| The poetry gets better and better! |
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Re: I FEEL MY HEART CRYING
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by faith_my_eyes on
Monday, 20th October 2003 @ 11:27:38 PM AEST
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| beautiful imagery |
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