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Never Give Up
Contributed by
Kimmie_mac
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Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
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Never give up on your dreams,
No matter how far away they seem.
They will come true one day, you’ll see,
With hope and courage they will be.
Do as you can, with what you’ve got,
Or you are doing all for naught.
Never give up on yourself,
Don’t leave your dreams on a shelf.
Before long they will be covered,
Waiting patiently to be discovered.
You have to realize who you are,
When you realize that you will go far.
Try to do your best in all that you do,
Don’t let others try to make you a fool.
So never give up on all your hopes,
Hold on to them as tight as a rope.
Without hopes and dreams you’ll get lost,
So hold on to them at all cost.
So don’t be discouraged if you fail,
Don’t slink down and tuck in your tail.
Your dreams are yours to make or break,
Something of yours no one else can take.
So never give up, Never give in,
Someday, somehow you will win
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Re: Never Give Up
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 11:24:48 AM AEST
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Great advice, Kimmie.... Hope all is well.. It was nice meeting you last night.
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Re: Never Give Up
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by krismisevski on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 11:36:31 AM AEST
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So never give up on all your hopes,
Hold on to them as tight as a rope.
Without hopes and dreams you’ll get lost,
So hold on to them at all cost.
The use of the words 'HOLD' and 'HOPES' seems a bit redundent here. Maybe replace with similiar words.
I understand where you are going with this. I'd like to see it simplified. Perhaps cut a few lines and leave a bit for the reader to imagine.
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Re: Never Give Up
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by Ivy on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 11:41:35 AM AEST
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| gr8 write. All u said is true. Ivy |
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Re: Never Give Up
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by stargazer on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 11:53:40 AM AEST
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Don’t leave your dreams on a shelf.
Before long they will be covered,
Waiting patiently to be discovered.
You have to realize who you are,
When you realize that you will go far.
Try to do your best in all that you do,
Don’t let others try to make you a fool.
~ I constantly telling people that you need to just set your goals high and never let anyone tell you that you can't reach them.... because you can. I hate people that give in... and don't try. I would much rather be a nobody and get somewhere with a smile on my face, knowing that I tried. Than be a nobody and get nowhere, tears streaming down my cheeks.
This was an amazing poem... and you... you have an amazing gift of words.
amy |
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Re: Never Give Up
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by Crow on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:19:09 PM AEST
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| so uplifting! and I agree with you. very good write, I enjoyed the read. Crow |
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Re: Never Give Up
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by painted_echos on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:54:00 PM AEST
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| good advice, and a wonderful way to give it...really liked this. don't stop talking to yourself (and writing it down!) thank you |
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Re: Never Give Up
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by Saira on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 02:28:42 PM AEST
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Yes, "Someday, somehow you will win"...such an inspiring and great poem. Loved it to bits. Thanks!
Saira
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Re: Never Give Up
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 04:53:01 PM AEST
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| Well done, good message keep up the good work |
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Re: Never Give Up
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 01:23:31 AM AEST
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Never give up. That's like the best advice you can give another human being. It's always good to reasure your own heart that you can realize your dreams. They can come true.
That is a great poem.
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Re: Never Give Up
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by venkat on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 03:55:24 AM AEST
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| Wonderful..a very good inspirational poem with a beautiful message.. venkat |
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