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I Lost It All
Contributed by
Kimmie_mac
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Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:25:00 AM in AEST
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I Lost It All
Her long black hair is lying on someone else’s bed,
Her brown eyes are looking into another lovers instead.
She’s loving him like she used to love me,
But I lost her when I didn’t fulfill her needs.
(Chorus)I lost it all when I lost my brown-eyed girl,
She was my life she was my world.
She was the one who made me a man.
When will this broken heart ever mend?
(Chorus)
My whole world came crashing in,
With her gone it will never be right again.
She was the half that made me whole,
She’s taken my heart and I’ve lost my soul.
(Chorus)
She’s found someone else to hold her.
I wasn’t there when she needed a shoulder,
She’s now gone from my life,
She is now another man’s wife.
(Chorus)
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Kimmie_mac
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2003-09-07 09:25:00]
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Re: I Lost It All
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by wolfflow on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 11:06:14 AM AEST
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its definitely a song and quite a good one as songs go, as good as any you might hear on the radio ayways,
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Re: I Lost It All
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 12:16:10 PM AEST
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Kimmie, this is beautiful... I can actually imagine a tune in my head... Go for it!!!!
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Re: I Lost It All
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by Crow on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:37:36 PM AEST
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| sounds country to me! good work. Crow |
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Re: I Lost It All
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by painted_echos on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:57:59 PM AEST
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| good...have you put it to music? agree with crow, feeling country |
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Re: I Lost It All
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by Saira on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 02:30:50 PM AEST
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Definitely a song....a good but oh so sad one. I'll agree with Crow too, it does sound like a country. Well done!
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Re: I Lost It All
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by Ramfire on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 07:50:36 PM AEST
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| This would make a great song - maybe the blues. Can you write the music for it? Could be a gold record. |
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Re: I Lost It All
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by Kimmie_mac on
Monday, 8th September 2003 @ 09:42:51 PM AEST
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No I can't write the music WISH I could. I often wondered what it would sound like.
Thanks, Kimmie_mac |
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