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Nostalgic rains
Contributed by
ravi
on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 05:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Rain drops crowded around a dirty window sill,
unplugging useless nostalgies,threatening to spill.
Memories of a guy filled with joy and mischief,
stealing mangoes from lush orchards,
escaping school and fooling teachers,
watching movies in dingy old theatres,
cheating professionally in boring exams,
beating up those rowdy bugging bullies,
kissing my first date from behind a bush,
smacking other girls hard on the bottom.
The guy grows up,sees more of life,
fighting for space in suburban trains,
standing in queus waiting for jobs,
going to pubs,drinking the defeats,
tasting sins in one night stands,
coming back home at last,
a little straight,a lot more crooked.
The rain has stopped,I switch to the mundane present,
there comes the landlord,to collect his long due rent.
Copyright ©
ravi
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2003-09-07 05:25:00]
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Re: Nostalgic rains
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 11:54:53 AM AEST
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| This is an excellent piece of nostalgic poem. Great job! |
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Re: Nostalgic rains
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:53:34 PM AEST
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Interesting write...enjoyed it.
Jenni |
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Re: Nostalgic rains
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by venkat on
Saturday, 13th September 2003 @ 02:57:53 AM AEST
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| Ahhghh.. wonderful scenes of life.. thoughtful you are.. good work. venkat |
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Re: Nostalgic rains
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by chrispywho on
Wednesday, 29th October 2003 @ 09:36:20 AM AEST
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| ha, makes me want to go out and do all those things, lovely. |
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Re: Nostalgic rains
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Wednesday, 24th March 2004 @ 02:27:48 AM AEST
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Very good job i enjoyed it
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