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Deathbed Melody
Contributed by
adsalamon
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Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
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Hope killed itself tonight
Lying messy on the bedroom floor
Soul given up without a fight
Swinging pretty on the cupboard door
Never made the right move
Nothing ever wants to work out right
What do I have to prove?
Emerge from darkness to the light
Deathbed Melody
Screaming voices in your head
Deathbed Melody
Hear the cries of the awakened dead
Cut, Bruise, Burn and Bleach
Watch this mannequin fall apart
Happiness now out of reach
Can't we make brand new start
Deathbed Melody
Screaming voices from within your head
Deathbed Melody
Hear the cries of the Immortal dead
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adsalamon
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2003-09-07 04:05:00]
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Re: Deathbed Melody
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:41:56 PM AEST
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Wow i loved this the first line was so amazingly awesome. 'Hope killed itself tonight' F*cking wow. Awesome and disturbing.
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Re: Deathbed Melody
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by EternitysLyre on
Saturday, 25th October 2003 @ 10:58:53 AM AEST
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| I agree. "Hope killed itself tonight" is a line that trancensds both the physical and the spiritual--it takes the rational mind by surprise and whisks us into the metaphoric fantasy of poetry. Well done indeed. |
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