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Silently Creeping
Contributed by
adsalamon
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Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 04:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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silently creeping mice are peeping
all over the kitchen floor
out jumps a cat
with its black padded paw
poor mice no more
Copyright ©
adsalamon
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2003-09-07 04:05:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Silently Creeping
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 12:15:10 PM AEST (User
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it doesn't even rhyme?!?!?!? \_"_/ |
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Re: Silently Creeping
(User Rating: 1 ) by adsalamon on
Wednesday, 10th September 2003 @ 10:26:39 AM AEST (User
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and? |
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Re: Silently Creeping
(User Rating: 1 ) by lilch4ever on
Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 11:31:59 PM AEST (User
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Awww so cute but poor little mouse. Good write for had been a nine year old. Good write. |
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