|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Never Thought
Contributed by
SuicidalSon
on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 11:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
|
This is not what I expected
Never thought I'd be rejected
Even though I've been neglected
My whole life
This is not what I intended
Never thought I'd be offended
By a man that I've resented
My whole life
This is not what I detested
Never thought I'd be infested
By these pains that I've invested
In my life
This is not what I persisted
Never thought I'd be protested
For the words that I presented
In my life
This is not what I imagined
Never thought I'd be abandoned
But this man has left me stranded
For my life
This is not how I had planned it
Never thought I understanded
Now I know that God has damned it
For my life
This is not what I have wanted
Never thought I'd be confronted
By a God that I have hunted
My whole life
This is not what I insisted
Never thought He'd be persistant
On my soul after He had missed it
My whole life
This is not what I invisioned
Never thought He'd be proficient
After all He never listened
In my life
This is not my last rendition
Never thought I'd get attention
By a God I never mention
In my life
This is not my last ambition
Never thought of my condition
Being lost along this mission
For my life
This is not what I've been wishing
Never thought of what I'm missing
In my ignorance I'm blissing
For my life
This is not at all acception
Never thought of this dejection
How I live in contradiction
My whole life
This is not all redemption
Never thought of the repression
Of this suicide obssesion
My whole life
This is not a good decision
Never thought of this description
How we rise to our desention
In our lives
Copyright ©
SuicidalSon
... [
2003-09-06 23:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Never Thought
(User Rating: 1 )
by Rage on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 12:50:12 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow, I can tell this was time consuming to write. Very well done! Enjoyed.
Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~ |
|
|
Re: Never Thought
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:24:55 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very interesting, creative write here!
Like rage, I think this one took some thought.
Very deep but that's a good thing!
PEACE, JOY, LUV,
emy |
|
|
Re: Never Thought
(User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:19:29 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Understanded, huh? lol... way to rhyme. This was fun to read. Great job.
~ Moonlit |
|
|
Re: Never Thought
(User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 09:28:44 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I loved the structure in this. I thought you had left but it appears you have not which is good and by all means write a part II. Keep it up.
Bobo (Joel) |
|
|
Re: Never Thought
(User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on
Tuesday, 9th September 2003 @ 07:01:16 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| this is good!!! a lot of thought process....be it in your noggin or the paper........but great all the same....bring on the second phase |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
