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A day with nature
Contributed by
Pompous
on
Saturday, 6th September 2003 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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As I walk through these green filled fields
No sounds of motors, no sight of wheels
The scene is so peaceful and calm
As I place a blue rose in the centre of my palm
The sky so blue as it stretches wide
The sound of the ocean as it reaches low tide
So quiet in this scene of serenity
How I wish it could stay like this for eternity
A soft ocean breeze, starts coming through
Sitting in the green fields, looking down at the ocean so blue
The golden sun brings warmth to the day
The joy fills inside me as I watch nature's way
Why couldn't it always, be perfect like this
Why can't it last, seems like a short bliss
Its not the end though, as it fading light
We'll get to see stars, coming out of the night
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Pompous
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2003-09-06 22:05:00]
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Re: A day with nature
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 12:11:18 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Pompous. This is absolutely beautiful!! It left me with such a peaceful feeling. Hope to see lots more of your work.
Jenni |
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Re: A day with nature
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by emystar on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 01:53:50 AM AEST
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Fantabulas!
Your body was in school but your heart was in heaven!
In this is see your very positive attitude-n-that's a good thang!
PEACE, JOY, LUV OF NATURE,
emy |
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Re: A day with nature
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by Ivy on
Sunday, 7th September 2003 @ 11:51:28 AM AEST
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| Nice write. Ivy |
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Re: A day with nature
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by LovingWhispers on
Sunday, 14th September 2003 @ 07:57:28 AM AEST
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| ahhhhhhhh yesss I love nature!! You may have been in school physically but your soul and senses were on the breeze.Wonderful feelings you have given me ..ta ;) |
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Re: A day with nature
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Tuesday, 20th April 2004 @ 12:55:31 AM AEST
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peaceful, serene, absolutely beautiful... poignant and descriptive... well done.
Lindsey
PS. I give you an A+... |
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